Sarah Caldwell
Mrs. S. Aiken
English 1101- descriptive paragraph
August 25, 2009

My car is a forest green color with brown mud spots on the scratched sides. The inside has a hovering cigarette mixed with vanilla smell to it. The seats are a deep grayish color with night black horizontal lines going down it. The carpet is a light gray with burn holes and the sight of dirt filled in it. My stereo has five different coins holding it together with and only works when it wants to. The steering wheel is a night black with the word ford stamped right in the middle. The engine is very temperamental and likes to overheat a lot it makes a loud humming noise as if it’s trying to sing but cant. The air conditioner makes a sceeking sound kind of like a dying mouse. Over all I think it’s time for a new car.

What I Want Out of This Class!!!

Im not very sure what i want out of this class...... I want to pass i know that. I do have some expectations for Mrs. Akins, those would be to help me because i am not good in English at all and i would really appreciate as much help as i can get. another thing i would like to get out of this class is to improve my reading ability and to improve my english vocabulary. When i get out of this class i would like to not have to struggle so much to read and understand the text as much as i do now.